Friday, September 14, 2007

Too, many, commas . . .

Man, oh, man.

I was just reading, some of my posts, and I noticed, just how many commas I use.

Geez. This reads just as if Adam West, the old Batman from the 1966 TV series, was doing the talking.

I need to pull out an English grammar text and review the use of commas.

Otherwise, besides Batman, I, may forever, sound, like Robin Hartl, the lady on, Hometime, who talks in fits and starts, as she strains to install, a light fixture in the remodeled, bathroom on PBS. (I think I need to get out more on Saturday afternoons.)

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